Cashing In - 002

I'l do it. I will be one of the two guys sitting up there in the balcony on the muppet's show, giving my critique...

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Let's face it. I like your work. It is good. But the small details are what seperates you from the best of the best.

How do you spell, "Reaper"? The worst thing a literary artist can do is to mispell (misspell?) a word (I'm too lazy to take a second and spell check mizspell)... but this is a professional critique, yes?

Good first caption (the thought).

I do like how you used black and white backgrounds for the differentiation of the two speaking parts. But in caption number 2, the order of speaking parts is wrong (I know details, details). The old man, whom we still do not know the name of yet, should be speaking first (his balloon needs to be on top of the Grim Reaper).

Now here is where you shine BRILLIANTLY! The last caption has witt in "Grim's" speak, as well as "???" speak.

That is what I see.

I feel your cartoon is worth watching some more...

Peace
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PS I'm no longer commenting how well your art appears to the eye. You are an expert at this. I'll just be commenting, when I can, on the story.